Some people say that the best way to discourage smoking is to make smoking illegal in public spaces. Other people say that this is not enough and that other measures are needed. Discuss both views, and give your opinion.
There are opinion on how to prevent and discourage people from smoking. Some say that making smoking illegal in public spaces is the best way possible. While others claim that more need to be done. Both sides have their own merits, but I am more inclined to the second point of view.
Total ban on smoking in public could reduce the number of smokers. Because some might feel embarressed when smoking where noone else smokes. Or just because they simply don’t want to go against the laws. However, many can still cotinue to smoke at home or in other private areas. So the laws alone couldn’t prohibit this bad habit entirely.
There are some ways way we can do to encourage people to quit this bad habit. To begin, we can use the internet, newspapers, TV chanels,etc to provide people with information provide people information about the harmful effects of smoking, like lung cancer or other respiratory issues, etc. Additionally, some special programs should be held at schools, teaching children about the damage of smoking. By that, not only the adults will see those negative effects and actively stop smoking, but also the younger generations will become more aware of this problem and won’t smoke in the future.
Smoking is a critical problem. And it is hard to convince people to stop doing that. But I believe that laws accompanied by proper educations could do a lot to prevent this problem.
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...public spaces is the best way possible. While others claim that more need to be done....
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...lic could reduce the number of smokers. Because some might feel embarressed when smokin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, second, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88796680498 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43080583284 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651452282158 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2465276502 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.625 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356996274206 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104514015041 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102256774559 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203772387003 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121705431289 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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