some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In terms of public health improvement, the concern of whether the most ultimate way is to offer sport facilities widely or to take other remedies has received a great deal of public attention. Although the provision of equipment could be a promising project, it still requires a number of steps to be followed.
The consequences of facilitating sport conditions are significant. Since an increasing number of citizens have access to sport facilities, good habit of taking exercises and hitting the gym potentially gains larger popularity in community, which motivates people to take care of their health; as a result, public health would be far more improved.
However, in order to gain public health comprehensively, government and individuals must jointly take steps. First, since health care plays a vital role in public health issue, health care system should be innovated to meet the needs of patients while the cost the cost has to be to regulated to affordable level. Second, by the fact that food has a large impact on health, food supplies must meet standard and be strictly under government's control while the public should be highly aware of their food consumptions and wisely consider their health issue.
In conclusion, offering sport facilities could be an affective remedy to enhance public health; however, improvements in health care systems and food standard are more likely to be sustainable in long-term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'the cost'.
Suggestion: the cost
...ted to meet the needs of patients while the cost the cost has to be to regulated to affordable le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, still, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23580786026 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87736146771 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580786026201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1739503036 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.875 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257701128269 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119769161384 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631709096725 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173305927492 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257144622974 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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