Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The low level of health is a problem for people in modern societies, with different opinions of how to tackle this worrying trend. A solution shows that it should providw more sport facilities in the public to encourage an exercise habit.
Nowadays, people have to deal many things with causing a waste of time. A busy and stressful job means that physical activities do not have a chance tp do in their life and their leisure time. If there were an easy way to take part in physical activities, everybody will like to exercise, instead of sitting in front of a TV every night. The government should give advantage conditions to adopt sport facilities in schools or parks, which can be cheaper to exercise.
Moreover, education to understand the important of physical activity is necessary. A local council cannot obligate their population by a law, which give them uncomfortable. There are a better way to tackle this problem. It is great if parks have sport facilities for everyone, parents and children can use them together. For example, in my city, the public places always have many equipments for population to do the physical activities, especially the crowded areas. It helps children get positive habit at an early age.
On the other hand, the other solution is necessary to resolve this problem. It can be a high tax for food products having too much fat. The public transports also need to develop to encourage people walking more.
In my opinion, it is very difficult to have effective results in the way to improve public health. The combination of multiple solutions should be perform to give people a happier life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
... part in physical activities, everybody will like to exercise, instead of sitting in...
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Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'performed'?
Suggestion: performed
...ination of multiple solutions should be perform to give people a happier life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91007194245 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68686736734 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9033043735 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2941176471 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193725009183 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617122108629 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571658540795 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122887890072 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554268486937 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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