Some people say that computer games are bad for childern by all means their believe that these games are contributing to childern development.
Now discuss other views and opinion.
In modern world, computers and electronics entertainment devices have become totally parvasive in our society.video game one aspect of electronic entertainment, has triggered many debates about its positive and negative affects on health.
In my opinion, benefits of video games outshine the drawbacks. If some caution taken by player in selecting type of game.
Among the bad effects of video games impact on health. Most of children are engrossed by indoor games. The children spending more time at home than played outside. Which has effect on their growth and development, weakness of eye-sight.
Another positive effects of video games is on brain development and get a different knowledge. As a example, online puzzle game, which improve thinking capacity. It improve hand and eye co-ordination both. Children has being multitasking due to the video games.
As a result, video games have both good and bad impacts. Choosing the right game is the first step to use them rightly. How to play and how much to play are the latter steps. It depends on the player how to act wisely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: Most of the children; Most children
...ffects of video games impact on health. Most of children are engrossed by indoor games. The chil...
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...o games is on brain development and get a different knowledge. As a example, online puzzle game, whic...
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Suggestion: an
...pment and get a different knowledge. As a example, online puzzle game, which impr...
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...me, which improve thinking capacity. It improve hand and eye co-ordination both. Childr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 178.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11797752809 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7766282041 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657303370787 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2593654181 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.7333333333 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8666666667 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169532198985 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569778903506 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512449764938 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976990520346 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408208278275 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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