There is no doubt that technology ushered a sea change in the every filed in the contemporary era, Therefore, some inhabitants of the society admit that magazines and newspaper are transformed into electronic books and revolutionized technology.But my views are not in the synchronization with this school of thought ,I have a numerous reasons to support my thoughts which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
Cutting edge technology and electronic books why I do not think to replace print media, First and foremost reason is that reading newspaper has become primary need of the individuals, they belong to whether affluent or middle society, they waiting desperately for it and enjoy with the cup of tea in the morning. Moreover, these are the portable, cheapest, easiest way to know about latest happenings of the world as well as it can carry in small bags ,On the top of that,electricity and any other power connection cannot be required. Last but not least, others attachments are like icing on the cake, to cite an relevant example, a magazines covers the attachments of fashion, cooking, sports,and celebrities life so connecting with entertainment has become a every body cup of tea .
On the other hand, radical approach of reading is provided by sophisticated technology because it makes videos and some animation which enhance reading interestingly. Needless to say that techno phobic will be having no place in this ever advance modern world.
To encapsulate, given aforementioned information that ,it is abundantly clear that reading habits will not replace unless the common man leave this habit. accessibility of newspaper will help to stay in the modern world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
...nic books and revolutionized technology.But my views are not in the synchronization...
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...chronization with this school of thought ,I have a numerous reasons to support my ...
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...is school of thought ,I have a numerous reasons to support my thoughts which will be di...
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...viduals, they belong to whether affluent or middle society, they waiting despera...
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...fluent or middle society, they waiting desperately for it and enjoy with the c...
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...ty, they waiting desperately for it and enjoy with the cup of tea in the morning...
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...portable, cheapest, easiest way to know about latest happenings of the world as well as it c...
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...ld as well as it can carry in small bags ,On the top of that,electricity and any o...
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...nts are like icing on the cake, to cite an relevant example, a magazines covers th...
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... attachments of fashion, cooking, sports,and celebrities life so connecting with ent...
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...onnecting with entertainment has become a every body cup of tea . On the other...
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...nment has become a every body cup of tea . On the other hand, radical approach ...
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... Needless to say that techno phobic will be having no place in this ever advanc...
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...ay that techno phobic will be having no place in this ever advance modern world...
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...e, given aforementioned information that ,it is abundantly clear that reading habi...
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...unless the common man leave this habit. accessibility of newspaper will help to stay in the m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24632352941 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10001798385 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639705882353 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.105381971 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.375 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188464941869 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078699485144 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499448994234 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109675520817 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194718131198 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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