Some people say that excessive noise should be a criminal offense, while others say they should be free to make noise without limitation.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People took many thousands of years to transform the world into a civilized society. In the past, cultural traditions had a great value among people, but now these are replaced by modern etiquette and manners. Nowadays in a democratic society, people are more conscious about their rights such as making noise as much as they like. This is considered a crime by many people, while some go against this comment. In the following paragraphs, both views will be discussed and finally, my opinion will be given.
First, to begin with, the former idea, excessive noise causes harm to individuals not only physically but also mentally. To illustrate, due to noise, serious health issues can occur such as heart failure, a rise in blood pressure, etc. In addition, sometimes it creates mental depression. In Denmark, the government makes laws and penalizes punishment for those who make noise in the hospitals or near a certain area to the hospitals. Moreover, it is harmful to the students they can not give attention to their studies. Furthermore, loud noise is not friendly for the environment especially, for wild animals. They become aggressive and feel annoyed after hearing a loud sound such as in-home the pets become frightened after hearing thunderstorms and their natural behavior is changed at this moment.
On the other hand, music is considered as a medium of relaxation and helpful for decreasing stress, so people have the right to hear the sound as much as in terms of intensity as they like. What's more, a concert is a popular medium for entertaining people, without practice, the band member can not perform to entertain people, therefore the limitation should not be given by the authorities. Furthermore, in some traditions such as wedding functions people in the society should accept the noise level.
In conclusion, loud sound has both advantages and drawbacks from different perspectives. To sum up all the points above, in my opinion, there should be a limitation of the noise level in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06886227545 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7904014931 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1383857487 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5882352941 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287887753948 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770324220072 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694512683367 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170566226464 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400769486062 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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