Some people say the government should not put money into building theatres and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical care and education.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The government have given a large amount of grant for the development of facilities for the civil. The prevailing member of society espouse the mindset that this money should be used to create better health and education centers rather than improving the quality of entertainment buildings, such as; cinema and gymnasium. From my standpoint, i, totally, support this concept with two indispensible reasons.
Firstly, the need to educate the students will rise at the same rate of the trends growth. In the future, the students should be able to compete with abroad learner. Thus, the governments are responsible to nurture their skills and provide them with adequate learning facilities. Moreover, in order to assist the ones who live under poverty, the need of education expansion to the remote area should be the imperative of our governments. therefore, we should utilize the cash to encourage the growth of our learning sistem and to stabilize our education system.
Secondly, the fitness standard of our society is dropping gradually. this means we should utilize the granted money from the government to nurture our medical care system and reduce the statistics of unhealthy individuals. we can upgrade medical equipments and recruit more detroit doctors and nurses. therefore, the governments should set this factor as their priority rather than entertaining people.
In conclusion, The governments should supersede their priority scale from entertainment to health and education because these factors will be crucial to the growth of the country. In my opinion, i believe that the best way to utilize the governments' cash is to maintain the quality and quantity of our critical area, such as;educating students and treating diseased individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42545454545 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86159869783 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8198682131 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.571428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220490847053 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743502656575 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475360862015 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137685689988 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343552806399 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.