Some people say that the government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people. Discuss and give an opinion.
It is said that the elderly should be aided by the government but the rest people believe that it is better for community leaders to put more resources into the young’s education. This essay will discuss both those views and from my point of view, I personally follow the second opinion for a host of reasons.
On the one hand, there is one cause for spending more money on caring for elderly people, which is to create the elderly a better life, those who have difficulties in particular. To illustrates, those are the disabled supporting the nation during wartime, it is necessary for the government to acknowledge their help by paying their salary monthly and supporting the treatment’s cost. Besides, with both the homeless and the poor who have no one to take care of tends to get struggle to do for a living, the authorities are able to provide a roof over their head or offer getting medical treatment free to encourage them to have a good life.
On the other hand, other people argue that the investment of the young about the educational aspect should be a priority due to a number of reasons. The first one is that investing amounts of money in children’s education whose families cannot afford to pay fees at school is indispensable in present days. From an economic perspective, educational institutions are capable to pay tuition fees or even give full scholarships to students who have got good results. In addition, providing as well as upgrading learning equipment is also necessary. These could range from the lab’s equipment to classes’ stuff including smart broads, computers, and projectors, both of which should be invested so as to improve the teaching quality. As a result, students have a chance to access more modern teaching methods than before.
To sum up, even though the government is believed to support the elderly financially, there exists an idea that investing in the young’s education has more preference. To my mind, the second view is valid as some reasons which are above-mentioned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, well, as to, in addition, in particular, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95918367347 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82931050214 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568513119534 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5733274342 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.846153846 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285019517863 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885325714443 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866629203123 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161051128998 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430853331271 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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