Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries is positive development, while many countries think they will lose their national identities as a result. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
In the contemporary world, opinions are divided as to whether increasing international contact is a beneficial or detrimental phenomenon to each nation. While some people assert that some benefit can be reaped from this trend, I hold a belief that national distinctiveness could be under threat.
On the one hand, <benefit>. From an economic perspective,international business trade offers domestic consumers a wide range of goods with more competitive prices. For example. since VN became a member of WTO, ,national buyers have been able to choose their desired products with a reasonable price rather than being forced to purchase exorbitant locally manufactured ones when domestic suppliers had a monopoly on that food. .From a cultural prospect, this phenomenon enables humans to broaden their knowledge of a new country. For instance,when befriending with native Americans, the Vietnamese can learn several Western etiquette such as being punctual, table manners and refraining taboos , all of which assist us in the path to becoming become global citizens.
On the other hand,it is true that national distinctiveness could be adversely influenced when international connection is established. To begin with, national companies could can be excluded from the market by international ones if regionally produced goods fail to compete against other global products. Take the first penetration of international brands as an example ,Vietnamese people only supported imported items because they were at a higher quality than those of Vietnam, which pushed governmental corporations to bankruptcy. Secondly, the mother tongue of developing countries might be consigned to oblivion due to a lingua franca. To be more specific, in order to pursue higher education in top-notch universities of developed countries like America, children in Vietnam are encouraged to put effort in acquiring English proficiency instead of grasping the command of Vietnamese.
In conclusion, although cross-national trade and cultural exchange can be seen as an advantageous trend, national identity lost can be present at any time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70977917981 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32335637556 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671924290221 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9475787058 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.230769231 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120906571687 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396752242313 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313588356136 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814550605682 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332461196121 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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