From ancient Greek to modern age, athletes have been always adore by society. Although the primary focus is to celebrate athletics prowess, the Olympic games and Wold cups have an incredible power to engage nations together and stop international conflicts.
Firstly, many sport events happening on regular timetable in different host countries. Even though sport events focus on athletic performance, rotating location across the Globe promotes cultural understanding within nations. People from around the world travel to the destination of sport event and undoubtedly are exposed into local culture. As a result, many sport fans can better understand different traditions and opinions, furthermore, they will more likely to return back.
Togetherness is another are of concern. Some people may oppose that sport events put together only fans and rest of the public remain aside. However, I would argue that when national team make it to the semi-final or final, most of the population, despite, sport is not their main interest, huddle in pubs or home in front of their TV and thrilled watching a live streaming. Take Czech republic for example. The Olympic games in 1998, in Nagano, when national Czech hokey team played final match with Russia, casual life in the country stopped; almost everyone in Czech watched the match home, at work or together with strange people on the town squares.
Last but not least, sport events in history till now have had an incredible power to stop local or international conflicts. People of any nation celebrate their athletes and for a while stopped the fights. In fact, every Olympic games, even during the Second World War for fortnight stopped all armed conflicts.
In short, not only sport events makes nations to celebrate together and make them proud of their national athletes, but they also appear to stop armed conflicts. Therefore, I believe that international sport events promote world peace.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'adored'.
Suggestion: adored
...o modern age, athletes have been always adore by society. Although the primary focus ...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
..., furthermore, they will more likely to return back. Togetherness is another are of conc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in fact, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27564102564 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57097636335 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.196574014 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208339739878 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776990822501 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085803170465 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117510025565 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611144297395 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.