Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With immense progress made in the development of economy as well as technology, numerous buildings are being constructed in every single second, while causing a great damage to the environmental system, which leads to a growing concern.
There is a prevailing view that the extinction of some particular species of plants and animals should be the primary problem we need to tackle. As every single species plays a crucial role in terms of ecological system and the disappearance of any of them is prone to entail a disaster, there is no doubt humans have to save preserve a number of rare animals. For example, the reproduction of many flowers relies heavily on insects such as bees. If human’s intervention eradicates one of these creatures, the flowers’ reproduction might be significantly influenced in a negative way, perhaps resulting in a fast decline of their population.
Some may contend, however, that some environmental problems are much more essential than preserving several species of plants and animals. The most significant and well-known environmental problem led by deforestation and massive uses of fossil fuels is global warming, which could affect everyone’s life directly, for instance, temperature. Since the rapid rise in average temperature can incur the increase of sea levels, a catastrophe, therefore, can occur in the foreseeable future, leading to millions of homeless people, if no power intervention is implemented. In addition, large use of fossil fuels also causes the air pollution in some specific regions, and long-time exposure to such condition can induce sever diseases related to lung.
From my personal perspective, the measures need to be implemented to not only the conservation of rare species but other serious environmental problems, because either of these can have extremely harmful impacts on human society and the nature.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great damage'.
Suggestion: great damage
...d in every single second, while causing a great damage to the environmental system, which lead...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: OF_ANY_OF[1]
Message: Consider simply using 'of' instead.
Suggestion: of
...ecological system and the disappearance of any of them is prone to entail a disaster, the...
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ction might be significantly influenced in a negative way, perhaps resulting in a fast decline of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43197278912 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11872119005 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646258503401 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9813505437 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.7 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192423406979 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749285955238 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834682038673 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974451041474 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401308635727 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.