People have different views about whether the most significant issue of environment is the disappearance of special kind of plants and animals. While in some ways seem reasonable that there are many more significant trouble of environment, I still believe that the main problem is absolutely not the loss of plants or animals.
There are several reasons why people might argue that the loss of particular species of plants and animals is the main environmental problems. Firstly, there is evidence to support the idea that the disappearance of one kind could make an awful impact on others. Biologists also published that the loss of a prey related to the decrease of hunting species. Secondly, the biodiversity could be damaged by disappearing of plants or animals. Finally, there are many kinds of particular species are on the way of extinction. Hunting special animals is still too common in developing countries in Africa or Asian.
In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that there are more important environmental problems. One of these is global warming which is causing bad effects on everything on Earth. For instance, with each degree increasing, agriculture of people, nutrients for plants and the survival of animals are all affected badly. Additionally, many governments around the world also created special area and organizations to protect environment. In fact, there are a lot of national parks where not able for hunting or hurt the lives of plants or animals with high security.
In conclusion, the loss of significant species is an important issue but I still believe that we have to solve more important such as global warming or pollution first.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13454545455 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91325610907 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6373745653 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268231424074 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858165927153 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799894359764 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155095076073 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367324957184 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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