some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. other say that there are more important environmental problems.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A vast majority of people opine that loosing spesific species and animals are the main factors of environmental issues. However, some people assume that other environmental issues are bigger concern. This essay will elaborate several factors causing a crises of environment.
The extinction of particular species in the world causes chaos on nature balance. Flora and fauna give human beings a life by keeping the land healthy. For example, the circle of diet on creatures always rounded in order to make balance. Otherwise, there are some studies which predicts the damage of our earth without any kinds of those species. There are still many animals and plants which bring benefits to land and produce foods or human needs. By loosing these kind of creatures, human life is going to be threatened.
On the other hand, climate change and deforestation are the most spotlight issues in the world. Climate change, evidently, causes the change of temperature throughout the world in the last decade. In fact, climate change has been a long disscussion among scientists and even for a little girl from Europe namely Greetha Turnberg who stop schooling to campaign climate change. In addition, deforestation make the absorp of carbon dioxide in the world declined dramatically. Consequently, it is really difficult to find fresh air from forest because of the exploitation.
In my opinion, climate change and deforestation are prominent issues of environmental problem because of the large impact on longlife human-kind. Although the loss of animals and plants are also big problems, but climate change and deforestation is bigger issues that should be done soon, especially by poeple in charge.
In conclusion, I believe that even there are a number of reasons of environmental concerns, climate change and deforestation are the most detrimental effects on earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a cris', 'a crise', 'a crisis' or simply 'crises'?
Suggestion: a cris; a crise; a crisis; crises
... will elaborate several factors causing a crises of environment. The extinction of pa...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'causes'' or 'cause's'?
Suggestion: causes'; cause's
...tion of particular species in the world causes chaos on nature balance. Flora and faun...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...roduce foods or human needs. By loosing these kind of creatures, human life is going to be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, really, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33445945946 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87394778598 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9866014888 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8823529412 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174370804378 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05458566735 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561328943275 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985664409366 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729467209419 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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