Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There have been heated controversies over environmental issues. While some people believe that the most concerning factor is the reduction in the number of species, others point out some other serious problems which deserve higher concentration. Although there is some compelling evidence for the first clause, from my perspective, the latter makes more sense.
First, on the bolstering side, supporters of the former statement highlight the seriousness when losing particular plants and animals. It is indisputable that the rapid loss of flora and fauna can lead to some unexpected outcomes, which negatively affects the life of both human and creatures. To be more specific, the reduction in the number of plants can act as a detriment to wildlife animals, obscuring the growth of biodiversity and threatening wild species in terms of their food sources and natural habitats. For instance, with a significant decline in the number of bamboos, pandas are likely to suffer from starvation or even extinction if the situation gets worse. In addition, human is also a patient of species loss. For example, the disappearance of trees can result in a concerning rate of carbon dioxide within the atmosphere, which negatively affects the air quality and living conditions.
However, on the other hand, opponents of the aforementioned statement believe other issues to be more considerable, given the consequences that they offer. First and foremost, it is widely known that the average temperature is climbing steadily due to the effect of uncontrolled industrial activities. This urgently requires international unity to take collective actions in order to curb the negative influences of global warming. Moreover, pollution is another pivotal issue that opts for immediate solutions. To put it simply, the exceeding rate of carbon emission is exploiting the natural atmosphere and causing daunting respiratory illnesses such as cancers. Therefore, it is plausible to say that there are more concerning environmental problems apart from the loss of floras and faunas.
To sum up, while it is conceivable why people evaluate species disappearance to be the center of attention, I still believe that other burning issues deserve special focus from the public.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46571428571 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03025424945 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591428571429 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0563825541 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5625 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196414208267 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056852825712 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653609575354 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109249972809 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398284975018 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46571428571 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03025424945 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591428571429 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0563825541 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5625 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196414208267 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056852825712 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653609575354 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109249972809 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398284975018 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.