Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
It is convinced that the most crucial problem for decreasing some species of plants and animals is assumed by a few people while other people think that environmental issues are the main problem. Personally, I am on the same page with several persons who hold surrounding matter is the most necessary thing which is supported by some reasons.
On the one hand, it is a common cause that a bad environment has a direct impact on human life. It is because every single person lives in an environment and if the circumstances are poor, it would be a boomerang for people such as the disease appearing from that place. For example, the trash-filled environment could be nests of mosquitos which might be the cause of malaria. In short, improper waste handling has a bad impact on humans around that place.
Even so, there are some demerits to keeping in line that the primer problem is reached by the extinction of several species of organisms. Firstly, many environmental problems are not handled properly. It is caused by people giving focus to rescue plants or animals rather than their surrounding matter. As proof, a lot of volunteers from a big city would salvage sumatran tiger while air pollution is increasing in their area. It is mean, they let through this crucial problem for a long time and it would be worst in the future. Secondly, lots of disasters happen in the human world. It is due to, the circumstances going horrible and presenting any impacts in human beings while every single person is only acting for rare plants and animals. For instance, there are no solutions for air pollution from local people in several places that it cause few respiratory diseases. As result, leaning toward one problem and ignoring other matters are not good ways out.
To sum up where my track, environmental problems are more crucial since it has impacts for human directly. For going to a better life, it is needed hard work and cooperation among people in the world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, even so, for example, for instance, in short, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80588235294 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6378991851 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2352476535 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1176470588 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230735381451 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763878332805 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101083368805 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156769950915 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101225248275 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.