The number of people who are at risk of serious health problem due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?
It is known that the rate of people who are at impact of dangerous health matter caused by obesity is increasing. In this essay I would examine the reason why obesity is rising and how to deal with it before coming to reasonable conclusion.
In the one hand, there are some causes of obesity. Firstly, many people prefer to consume fast foods rather than healthy foods. It is because people could come upon fast foods more straightforward which practically present in considerable area. Therefore, people could obtain fast foods wherever they stand on and whenever they demand it. For example, people who lives in a large city could purchase fast foods such as burger, kentucky, or spaghetti in practically area as KFC and MCDonald. However, good taste is donating major reason for fast foods enthusiast. Even so, people might be In short, fast foods have a bit more important role to come into existence for many people which is creating obesity rise steadily. Secondly, many people could not set up exerc ise frequently. It is due to they have spent their time for working. Such as, people have worked at the office a whole the day afterwards they went to home while their body seemed exhausted. Thus, obtaining relaxation might be prime option. For instance, the office workers in large companies have substantial workload and they are coming home late frequently. At that point, there is no time to having exercise. Undeniably, people constantly consume carbohydrates and glucoses. If people do not take on excercise regularly, carbohydrates and glucoses would settle in their body as fats. Inevitably, overweight caused by substantial fats in their body.
Nevertheless, to tackle this problem, first of all, people should preserve the pattern of diet which they have consumed inasmuch as, what people have eaten would be fats in their body. For instance, people who lives in a large city should purchase fast foods rarely instead to get them frequently. They have to obtain healthy foods for their diet such as vegetable or milk. In addition, managing the time between excercising and working would be a good egression to maintain the weight in normal and dropped dramatically the number of obesity. For example, people could excercise previous to go to the office in the morning.
On the whole, these are many harmful problems in obesity case thus people should avoid this matter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 546, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foods'' or 'food's'?
Suggestion: foods'; food's
...taste is donating major reason for fast foods enthusiast. Even so, people might be In...
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Line 2, column 1419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...used by substantial fats in their body. Nevertheless, to tackle this problem, fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, such as, first of all, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0201511335 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61269422135 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518891687657 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7391561888 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0416666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5416666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273375581555 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766123914857 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427027542836 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17596826796 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261757377756 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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