Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is thought that nowadays shopping has been made more convenience by modern innovation, but other people were disagree with this problem. From my point of view, i mostly agree with the first notion because of its practical in the new era. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
first of all, in the international world and with the appearence of modern technology that individuals are just concentrate in their occupation, so online shopping is greatly significant for the population life. Not only will online source provide various quality production for adolesence which improve their mentality life, but also numerous website have been established such as amazon or facebook, advanced the economic background of their country. Futhermore, many jobs can be created for the young generation which reduce the propotion of unemployment and homeless people of their country. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Richy Birth, the famous interviewer and professor, which is an expert about the success of europian nation where have appropriate plans for online shoping. The statistic demonstrated that nearly every nation has got plenty of achievement in their improvement.
However, we can not neagte the drawback of this phenomenon for the society. More weakness food will appear in the makert which have demerits affection for the postgraduate health and their immune systerm and also socioeconomic trouble can be widened gradually where just wealthy and talent people can approach with import productions. Moreover, governments take advantage from this investment for their own revenue, harmful influence will be led by this action to the teenager.
To conclude, though my agrument from the essay, i totally agree with the convenience of online shopping, but it still have some negative aspect for the society. The state need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the nation development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38079470199 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80471394842 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8303490122 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0790224558368 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317646678902 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583643994843 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567887748048 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055736114857 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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