Some people say that the most important thing for being rich is people have opportunity for helping other person ? Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the rich have a capacity of supporting other people. In my opinion, i partly agree with this statement due to some reasons below
On the one hand, it is the local have a tendency to gain enomous benificial economic advantages via higher taxes and investment in corporations from the rich. Evidently, the affluent may pay higher taxes than others who have been living under the bread line.As the result, the government could allocate this taxation for the school expansions, new hopital contructions in order to reinforce and enhance the literacy rate as well as local health protectoon. Secondy,the majority of the pople who have higher income than average one own a number of companies and multinational entreprises which creat incresing job opportunities for the domestic people. Meaning that, the lower unemployment rate comes at the expense,and then the crime rate would reduce.
On the one hand,there are some drawbackd when people become rich such as work exploitation and becoming inappopriate mirros for the youth. In terms of work abuse,according to the Australia newspaper, it is recorded that international students are exploited such as working longer, being paid lower income than that in labour regulatiom ,worst becoming a victim of harrasment by restauranteurs, companies. Moreover,the rich probably are not suitable mirrors for youngsters. Some the young affluent are tend to express their higher social status through postinf luxury items,world-class clothes. This can lead to the fact that some teenagers perhap whine their parents to purchase these goods by all cost, gradually children would become spoiled and posses inappropriate manners.
In my conclusion, i suppose although the rich made a great contribution to social life and economic development, people should concern about itsdisadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, well, i suppose, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49122807018 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09441856978 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645614035088 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5076228537 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.272727273 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226580679669 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873299279419 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738543270503 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13458866002 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515959028355 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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