Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is argued that people from different cultures and ages can understand each other better by using music. I partly agree with this opinion for some reasons which are outlined in this essay.
On the one hand, I understand why some people think that the music is one of the best ways to bring everyone together. The reason worth mentioning is the effect of music on the feelings of people. Indeed, there are variety types of music in the world, and each type contain a particular energy that influences on emotion of people. Telling story, for example, the author will tell everyone about a story in a part of his life. When listeners are listened to his song, they see themselves in this story and sympathize with singer. In the past, there were a lot of songs to cheer spirit of populations to protect their country with out invading, they accompanied to fight with high spirit, strength and gallant regardless of ole young, man or woman.
However, I also hold a belief that people can not understand each other by music. Firstly, some people do not have knowledge about music, if they are listened to a song, they will think this song as an essay without emotions even they feel noise and turn off or move to another place. The second reason is the different about music style between old and young people, the elderly are likely to listen to the music having soft melody whilst teenagers prefer upbeat tunes, as a result, they can not have the same feeling and not understand each other.
To conclude, although it cannot be denied that music has some disadvantages to bring everyone together, I am of opinion that music is still the good way in which everyone can sympathize together.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 625, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...of populations to protect their country with out invading, they accompanied to fight wit...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, still, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68120805369 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3583347333 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6251575027 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27415238124 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1027379324 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728211307425 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191494136838 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800156028614 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 625, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...of populations to protect their country with out invading, they accompanied to fight wit...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, still, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68120805369 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3583347333 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6251575027 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27415238124 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1027379324 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728211307425 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191494136838 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800156028614 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.