Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas . Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?
The proliferation of contemporary lifestyles has brought about several socio-economic debates. For instance, many people think houses and delivery are effective important live in many large city especially bussiness, So they have been encouraged transfer to countryside .While this has created several positive impacts, there are also a few associated issues, all of which will be discussed in this essay.
On a positive note, it can be recognised that there are several advantages relating to this situation. Firstly, one major benefit is that business owners can hire employees with cheap cost. Indeed, mostly cost hire in rural more cheaper than . For example, In rural area in VietNam, cost of living is not high so business owner have use advantage can hire employees cheap cost can help cost of hire employees. In addition, another advantage is that train people in rural area is not difficulty more than people in city.This is due to the fact that business owner use advancetage workmanship by manual labor. A good example for this is that many factories need manual labor but in many large city, mostly academic level is very high so they not accept to work by hand ensure business owner approach employees in rural area to work for factories by hand.
Moving on, several detrimental impacts can be identified. To start with, one unfavourable aspect is that waste of time to train for employee. This is because rural people have academic level is low more than large people so that much of time to train. For instance, have many machine to need use but some machine have need level high use that forbid smooth operation because of that they need to train employees with the way that careful and wholeheartedly instructing employees are without training that lead to damaged to company. Moreover, another drawback could be effective habitat by factories.In fact, many factories have exhaust fumes to around enviroment and unnecessary items are littered indiscriminately is pollute the environment . From my perspectives,In China , Besides many factories put in here that the risk of enviromental is high to change China is one of the countries have risk of enviromental very highest
All in all, it is clear that this phenomenon includes a wide range of both positive and negative elements. However, I wholeheartedly believe that business owner are encouraged can help add work to people and increased revenue to company
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13636363636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83488449889 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.5760610347 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.6 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170335387624 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576900470183 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426237015094 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984347828999 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384824685191 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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