Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas . Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?
Globalisation arises many difficulties to the business, especially the problems of transporting products and accomodation. To deal with those obstacles, governments suggested companies to move their office to the surburban or rural areas to reduce the burden. However, this measure have both negative and positive sides. Personally, I tend to believe that the disadvantages outweigh its benefits.
On the one side of the argument, the most remarkable advantages of moving companies to the countryside is that the price of offices for lease in rural areas are often cheaper and the sizes a...
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this measure have both negative and positive sides
this measure has both negative and positive sides
the price of offices for lease in rural areas are often cheaper
the price ...is often cheaper
Sentence: Globalisation arises many difficulties to the business, especially the problems of transporting products and accomodation.
Error: accomodation Suggestion: accommodation
Sentence: To deal with those obstacles, governments suggested companies to move their office to the surburban or rural areas to reduce the burden.
Error: surburban Suggestion: suburban
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