The line graph shows the percentage of women who were employed in four countries from 1985 to 2005
The line graph below reveals the employment rate of women in four different countries for an interval of twenty years. The data is shown for USA, Korea, Afghanistan and France from 1985 to 2005.
As is shown clearly from the graph, all nations witness an upward trend of employed women except for Afghanistan.
To be specific, the percentage of working women in America shows steady increase over a period of 15 years, from 45% in 1985 to around 62% in 1985 until it is followed by a slight downward trend and ends up at exactly 60% in 2005. Having the same tendency with the USA, the percentage of employed women rises stably during the interval of 25 years with the annual average increase of about 5%. The figures for working women in this country vary from 20% in 1985 to a peak at precisely 40% in the year of 2005 with no decrease during that period. In the case of france, the rate of working women in this country drops substantially during the second half of the 1980s, which results in the lowest point at over 30% in 1990 before rising continuously until 2005. In term of Afghanistan, the data of employed women in this nation grows moderately over a decade from 1985 to 1995. After 1995, however, there is a dramatical decrease in the rate of working women for 5 years, from 40% in 1995 goes down to merely 10% in 2000 and it continues to drop then but with the lower percentage.
In conclusion, among four countries, the USA and France are the two countries where have the majority of women are employed in 2005.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
The line graph below reveals the employment rate of wo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'then', 'except for', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245161290323 0.268076937826 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.0870967741935 0.116061578633 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0548387096774 0.0759168565197 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0387096774194 0.0366838410393 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00645161290323 0.0131127313244 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.222580645161 0.155750635184 143% => OK
Participles: 0.0322580645161 0.0379272487307 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40280303932 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0225806451613 0.0210936926555 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00322580645161 0.00175180941692 184% => OK
Determiners: 0.116129032258 0.0948980150116 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00645161290323 0.00967000014798 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1525.0 1161.00487805 131% => OK
No of words: 277.0 196.9 141% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50541516245 5.90752243213 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.73763899035 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.285198555957 0.337110787985 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.184115523466 0.247514529752 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.12274368231 0.171178102325 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0685920577617 0.112407865282 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40280303932 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523465703971 0.546246751206 96% => OK
Word variations: 51.626043282 49.3433353143 105% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.7 23.0094962315 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9584194902 42.9750493124 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.5 135.714022679 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 23.0094962315 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.689975730869 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 46.1115523466 47.7609492067 97% => OK
Elegance: 3.78048780488 2.94281807926 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.608712544885 0.418131533498 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.196809347497 0.181151798455 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0875429698915 0.0850326197045 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.740305354027 0.706616315825 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145695118554 0.157042692854 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.32147166967 0.228904883108 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589929826073 0.108899403657 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.328065974448 0.367819155151 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0845348728382 0.0812612215331 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.396858586944 0.316326947829 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10617901028 0.0921553760075 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.