Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Music is one of our life aspects that we found it the most interest. Moreover, it is well known that music is a buoyant measure of taking people from different cultures and ages together. I am strongly advocate that I have a same view with regard to the statement that say music is a good step to bring myriad citizens from different group.
To begin with, music has manifold genres that always connected to each other, for example; Jazz and Pop, R&B and EDM. In addition, the young generation is more likely to keep in touch with Rock, R&B, and EDM genre. On the other hand, the older generation has more tendency to listen to Jazz, Blues, and Pop genre. Nowadays music industry is already improved a lot since the beginning of 21st century. Therefore, myriad kinds of music genre can be mix into one song, and numerous of different generations can gather up and listen to this kind of song together, for instance; Lemon by Kenshi Yonezu. This song is about Kenshi’s grandfather that had already passed away, the lyrics itself have a plethora of deep meaning and contain many lyrics that related to love. Consequently, array of people find this song suit perfectly with their taste.
The next, music has a multitude beneficial things for our body, for example; it can reduce our stress after working or even studying for almost 12 hours. Moreover, when we have a reunion event or even a party, music will be our first priority to be included in such event because it can make us feel relax and make our relationship stronger than before.
In a nutshell, music can brings people from different groups, so that they can become more stronger.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'advocated'.
Suggestion: advocated
...ltures and ages together. I am strongly advocate that I have a same view with regard to ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...han before. In a nutshell, music can brings people from different groups, so that t...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...fferent groups, so that they can become more stronger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, to begin with, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.723183391 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39190214409 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602076124567 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2225717138 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161658059793 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623533435237 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710120698486 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123968468004 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879689877312 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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