Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, individuals have been searching to find some ways in order to communicate more to each other from every part of the world. Several people claim that one of those methods has been music which could be practical to unify all the world’s citizens. I myself totally concur with this view based on some reasons that will be clarified later.
To commence with, several similar facts have propelled individuals to consider music as the linking factor between them. The main one is that music has not had any specific language. Songs have been created by music instruments which have been produced in any regions of the planet. Therefore, in one band, there could be members of various countries, such as a famous group named beautiful which has included Japanese to Mexican musicians. Consequently, because of the concept of music which is relaxation while listening to it, it is no longer matters where the player come from. They all have just asked to perform one rhythm perfectly.
In addition, let alone the songs which have had only music, the ones with lyrics have been easy to follow for not-native singers. Since they have not been forced to learn all the aspects of new and foreign language, they have just practiced several sentences with their accent. Take, Chris de burg, who has sung a Persian song with Arian band without any difficulty. For that reason, lots of signers have been encouraged to accompany international musicians to sing various music to not only expand their fame, but also to get to know about various traditions and types of melody.
In conclusion, although people across the world have indicated many differences from one another, music has gathered them together without any preferences. As a result, because they have been no needs to learn other languages as well as abundant of skilled musicians around the world, music could be beneficial for making better connections between citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03738317757 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51598474738 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595015576324 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4309669348 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113894358165 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447888452274 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366484478658 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836806869378 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350415227064 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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