Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
As globalization and integration between nations around the world have become a new trend in recent years, learning another language beside mother tongue is the most effective method to involve in such international progress. It has been a common topic of debate whether holidays and occupation are the only reason for acquiring a foreign language or there are other explanations for this trend. Although both views are valid, I wholeheartedly agree with the latter statement.
Traveling and working abroad is claimed to be the only reason why people gain a foreign language by parts of the society. To begin, in terms of traveling, learning another language can give people the key to access cultural diversity. This is mainly because language is the reflection of culture and tradition, when having the acquisition of languages, it is simple to understand the local expression and stories such as fairy tales and mysteries. Regarding jobs, learning another foreign language makes way for accomodation of a higher income. The example can be recorded easily when comparing candidates with or without the IELTS certificate. It is undoubtedly that those who acquire a high level in English tend to be assessed for a higher position.
In contrast, there are numerous advantages associated with this trend explaining why people should prepare another language. First, it greatly benefits those who are taking an overseas course. By having the second language in advance, they will stand a good chance of being offered a scholarship with reduction of tuition fees. Moreover, a year of learning local language will not be compulsorily required. Alongside with learning, teaching foreign language can bring back significant benefits. This case is very popular recently as teachers of a foreign language are often respected and prefered to have a better salary.
In conclusion, while many people belive that acknowledging another language is only for the purposes of traveling and occupation, i suggest these are inadequate because it affects people on almost every aspect of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e purposes of traveling and occupation, i suggest these are inadequate because it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, while, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33841463415 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86519030984 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588414634146 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.444373732 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339267936044 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10696504501 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936173481321 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201160366394 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440932492948 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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