Some people say that schools do not make enough efforts in teaching young people to look after their health and they add that school should undertake health education more seriously. Do you agree or disagree
Nowadays people are suffering more with health issues zas compare to past due to gloomy change in their lifestyle and dietary habits. Since awareness and practice of good habits is an essential to learn from childhood to live illness free life, therefore a part of crowd opine that schools should focus towards imparting knowledge regarding health among students. I completely agree with the given notion as schools play an imparative role in teaching healthy practices to students.
To embark with, schools can add health education in their syllabus to make it compulssory to learn about healthy habits. Moreover, schools can organize a health checkup camps on regular basis, where they can check the health status of students, along with that they can also arrange some seminars regarding the benefits of opting healthy lifestyle by some famous doctors. Furthermore, in the institutes teacher should motivate students to eat healthy by showing them some videos or giving some live examples of adverse effects of consuming street food.
Along with that schools can give rewards to the students who have regular attendance and never availed any sick leave, as it will motivate the students to follow healthy habits to keep them illness free and they can avoid absenteeism in school. Since parents also play an essential role in a child life, therefore teachers should advice the parents to strictly follow the healthy diet plan for children at home too. With less absentees students can perform better in their academics and can achieve the pinnacle.
In summary, schools should put enormous effort to teach health education to students to create a healthy world with healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23529411765 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44051195775 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6876149591 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236299167421 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105010787537 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063367556159 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160836064109 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566471731682 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.