Some people say that self-employment is better than working for a company or institution. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
Money is the worst discovers of human life but it is most trusted material to test human nature. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remain irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that which type of work is beneficial; self-employment or work for a company. Through this eassy, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through example and assertions and shape up my opinion by end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that self-employment give many advantages and main is people can choose their work by own interest. However, people can manage their working hours and do their work according own pace. The strenghten their veiw point by claiming that self employed require huge investment, patience and determination. An individual should have good decision making and also risk taking abilities to run a business successfully.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that when people working in a company then they can strong their boundaries and relations with others. However, an individual do their work only fixing number of hours and without face any risk they can save their money. Whereas, people need no worry about correct decision taking and company provide security for workers.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that self-employment is better than working under a company but an individual should understand the essential requirement for running their own business and should be ready to face challenges. People should spend some year in a job to gain job experience.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, whereas, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12403100775 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81224455336 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.674199839 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.692307692 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283497209941 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965057211078 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775167312417 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170696223413 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426426000824 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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