Some people say that sports play an important role in society Others however think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is true that, in this contemporary era, sports are being gained more popularity in all over the world among people, where some people believe that it is mandatory in our life. on the other side, sizeable majority of people also introspect it is only for free time. Furthermore, according to my perspective, sports play a vital role in our country as well.

To start with, people have lack of knowledge how to manage groups so when sports played by them then take more knowledge how to co-operate with group members in a good way. Secondly, if anybody has a keen interest in different sports so they can earn high amount of money as well as their managers also get high salaries by them. For example, virat kohli he is a well-known cricketer in whole world. In addition, he is taking high salary and do hard work.

Looking at the other view, there are numerous points.
Firstly, sports are astounding for our health if we play on daily basis it may prevent some diseases like heartattack and blood pressure and so on. Moreover, it is good for rejunating our mind or getting some relief from stress. Additionally, it improves our concentration power and bones and help to keep fit.
For instance, in recent research, we got to know, many scientists or doctors contemplate that sports are good for spending our leisure time.

On a concluding note, undoubtedly, playing sports are good for using our free time in correct way yet, we must understand that sports have lots of advantages for human body mentally, or physically as well as for our economy.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: On
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76383763838 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61304121062 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634686346863 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3398091447 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7692307692 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136563963893 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512348072403 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363205501507 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775357688584 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366629523604 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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