Some people say that we do not need printed newspaper anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There are many different ways to acquire information today than in the past. While I accept that online newspapers may have advantages over the printed ones. I believe that there is still a great need of physical newspapers in this modern world.
On the one hand, accessing news on the Internet has various benefits in some ways. Firstly, online newspapers keep readers up-to-the-minute in a much faster way than traditional newspapers does. For example, the event of Donald Trump who won the electoral election reach people immediately after the result are public, whereas it can take a few days for the local editors research and publish their news officially. Secondly, the internet provide people with the free, latest information at home without having to buy the printed newspapers at stores., which allows individuals save money and a great amount of time.
On the other hand, I am in favour of the idea that physical newspapers still are irreplaceable due to a couple of reasons. The first one is that they are one of the most credible sources of information. Since everyone can write and post news on the Internet, it can include unreliable information which has not been supervised carefully before releasing. Additionally, online newspapers often negatively affect people’s health. For example, if we spend several hours reading online news every day by using your mobile phone or computer, this could lead to a harmful impact especially in your eyes. Finally, reading news on newspapers traditionally enables people to concentrate on what we are concerning, rather than the online one which can distract them by tons of advertisement.
In conclusion, it is true that people nowadays are increasingly utilise many other mediums to get information, it does not mean the significant need of physical newspapers no longer exists.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
There are many different ways to acquire information today than ...
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Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ire information today than in the past. While I accept that online newspapers may hav...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...he internet provide people with the free, latest information at home without having to b...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sical newspapers still are irreplaceable due to a couple of reasons. The first on...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...nables people to concentrate on what we are concerning, rather than the online one which can d...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'utilised'.
Suggestion: utilised
...e that people nowadays are increasingly utilise many other mediums to get information, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22818791946 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92921306432 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1562731805 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164549340707 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554736282473 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405352291442 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10103038537 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129789896863 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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