Some think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that some types of jobs are much more appropriate for men than women and vice versa because of their own genders’ strengths, while I accept that this opinion may be true to some extent, I think that female and male now are equal in terms of such aspect.
On the one hand, there are certain tasks that especially suit for each gender. Female individuals are often considered more patient, thoughtful and considerate, so many families would be assured if they could hire a nanny or someone that is a woman taking care of their children. Besides, with noticeable qualities such as powerful and healthy of men, it would be easier for them to work in physically demanding environment. As a result, when it comes to jobs as a mineworker or plumber, people tend to think of no one but male persons. In Vietnam, for example, those jobs are taken up mostly by men being breadwinner of their families, since employers usually do not trust that women are strong enough to handle such positions.
On the other hand, I do believe citizens have the right to do any jobs no matter what their gender is. Firstly, in some developing countries such as Turkey and Mexico, people now can see many male teacher kindergartens and nurses. They have proven that gender is not an issue when doing a job. Additionally, there used to be biased views about females getting involved in politics, but people cannot deny the increasingly important role of women in this modern world. Take Hillary Clinton as an example, a very potential candidate for the last presidential election over the US, she is not only a successful businesswoman but also leading politician who is decisive and knowledgeable no less than other men. Therefore, gender stereotypes should not be hold since they no longer makes sense in the world where women deserve to be treated as equal as men than ever.
In conclusion, while men and women possess separate strengths in doing dissimilar careers. I would argue that there is no limitation for both genders to do each other’s vacancies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84702549575 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71688668301 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592067988669 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7556161845 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.214285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301983330671 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998847126027 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628899882713 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196970963937 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440021082806 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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