Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some
certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is regularly argued that each gender has different characteristics because of a number of certain jobs are appropriate for males rather than females. From my perspective, I partly agree with this statement, I believe that females and males have equality in human lives.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why citizens claim that some works are only suitable for men. One reason for this could be that men and women have some distinct characteristics which affect the range of jobs open to them and which also affect their choice of careers. In fact, men tend to have physical strength, they are expected to do some jobs, in which strength is essential, such as engineers as well as builders. In contrast, male personalities are likely to be more patient than males. Therefore, they are supposed to work some jobs, which is required of their patient, such as nursing, teaching, or taking care of the children or elderly.
On the other hand, I believe that these jobs that men can do, women can do too. In the first place, by living in advance in technology, there are numerous jobs, the physical strength is not crucial, such as human resources or Information technology. In fact, men and women are instructed by the same education system since they have equal opportunities to apply for all of the jobs. To take Vietjet air is a demonstration, it is a famous airplane brand and it is operated by Nguyen Thi Phuong Thao, an ambitioned girl in Vietnam, she attempted to make full use of her ability in order to run her business and she has gained a number of successful and gradually become one of the top wealth in the world.
To sum up, males and females have the same equality in society and they ought to attempt to do any jobs in their abilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, well, in contrast, in fact, such as, as well as, to sum up, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69230769231 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65409388166 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548076923077 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9372970082 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306798450276 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106880723499 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844253197392 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156763736718 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732083946951 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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