Some people say that we do not need printed newspapers anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that traditional newspapers will be on the wane in the digital era due to the dominance of internet-based news. Although I agree that certain advantages may be brought by online ones, I think that printed versions can not be dispensed with.
To begin with, accessing news on the Internet has various merits in some ways. First, e-paper keeps readers up to date faster than conventional newspapers. For example, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the number of confirmed cases was easily updated to the minute online while that of printed news took a few days to publish. Moreover, digital news helps people save their money and time. It means that if they use such versions, they can have access to different types of information sources with no cost and enjoy their own comfort at home instead of going to newsstands and buying traditional ones. Finally, its materials are virtually richer than traditional publications because they include illustrations such as clips and records that are impossible to appear in printed ones.
On the other hand, I believe that conventional versions are still dispensable for a variety of reasons. The first is that they are one of the most reliable sources of information. Because everyone may freely create and upload articles on the Internet, untrustworthy materials have not been fully censored before release. As a result, readers are bombarded with a barrage of news about dysfunctional happenings in their country, resulting in their grim view about the prospect of their nation. In addition, apart from young consumers, there are still older ones who find it difficult to read news on electronic devices' screens, so the printed press is considered an optimum alternative for them.
In conclusion, while individuals are increasingly giving preference to digital newspapers due to their ability to be updated quickly and without payment, I strongly convince that there is no longer a vital position for the conventional press.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, apart from, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2125 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85711830347 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1865112179 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0586260698695 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0206321267932 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0199265546453 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0378253832848 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205675937928 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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