We live in an age where people become less attached to their past and think that history has a small importance in the modern life. In my opinion, history is so important, and we must study it more seriously. Otherwise, we lose the link to our origins which will affect us so badly.
Studying history in this modern world where technology has changed everything around us, might seems useless to some people. However, although the fact that we become far from any similarity with the past ages, we must keep that link to our previous generations. Moreover, the benefit we gain from studying the past is significant, from avoiding mistakes to make better decisions, learning history gives us the advantage to not repeat the same mistakes.
Preventing children from learning history will affect them in various ways. First of all, if children are not taught history, this will make them care less about their personal past and put them in a day to day life, which will reduce the aiming of creating something great and last forever. Secondly, teaching history is the only way to keep traditions and culture passing from generation to the next. Therefore, ignoring history will destroy this culture and erase the unique identity of nations.
In conclusion, no matter the development and the changing in today's world, history must remain as one of the most important subjects, and children must be motivated to learn about the past and the previous generations. The government, on the other hand, must pay more attention to protect history from being forgotten.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01915708812 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55103945343 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578544061303 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3379550858 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237652995227 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894987373983 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449040787972 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142475592687 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162020557131 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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