some people thing that the government should establish free libraries in each town other believe that it is the waste of money since people can access the internet at home to obtain information Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
In the era of artificial intelligence and internet, the habit of reading books and acquiring knowledge from learning through paper resources get declined in recent years. Some people argued tha the government needs to set up free libraries in towns, while others say that this is the waste of time because of the information available on the internet. I support that providing free access to the libraries in every place can encourage people to read and to gain valuable insights.
In one hand, the use of internet significantly increased by the pupils because of accessing it from everywhere at anytime. People have resources like mobile, laptops, iPad and Pc so they can easily search any type of information within minutes on the search engines available on the internet. Additionally, they also have an opportunity to share it to anyone through Web, Bluetooth and other sources. However, in this instance, some of these information could be biased and unpredictable because they do not have enough authentication, it is mentioned by so many people which is insufficient and unable to help you with the exact amount of knowledge you need, therefore it is important to understand the importance of taking guidance from books.
On the other hand, the books are always be a good source of getting done any research or finding about something. The libraries have different types of books with genres, so it would be exciting and interesting. The government must to know how to tell people about benefits of it and by this they are also make sure that the entry of anyone to the library will be free. Campaigns and events can have higher rate of involvement, including exhibitions play an important role for attracting the readers. The free libraries in the towns make people together, they know about different culture, values and beliefs through books. Furthermore, the books are the most fair and clean source of sustaining the reliable quality of information which make it most versatile and effective method of achieving knowledge and information.
In conclusion, I suggest that the development of libraries play an excellent role in the society for giving up right information to the public with exact requirements. Thus, people may not have misunderstanding in the communication and sharing their information with others. This also unite people of different backgrounds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17829457364 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95193147026 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521963824289 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4589552726 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1875 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233971213633 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796646185709 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606429514891 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152093695329 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050272516086 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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