some people think that the advantages of advertising sports products through famous sports players outweigh the disadvantages. to what e do you agree or disagree.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
Advertisement suppose to be the best source of masscommunicat...
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Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... be the best source of masscommunication .presently, some proportion of masses ass...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'endorsed'.
Suggestion: endorsed
...w. First and foremost, adverts which is endorse by eminent sports player make people mo...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...st, adverts which is endorse by eminent sports player make people more extravagant. To...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...e plethora of advertisements related to sports products which is made by sportsman and...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...sary products without any need. Therefor,people spend a hefty amount of money on sports...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... players enhance the level of pollution.To be specific, people purchase new things...
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Line 3, column 657, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...s made by sports players does not fully holds the water. Further emphasising on m...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ers does not fully holds the water. Further emphasising on my point of view.Adveris...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Adverising
...Further emphasising on my point of view.Adverising with the help of sports players increas...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ayers increase the excessive consumerism .Moreover, the main motive of adverts org...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ers increase the excessive consumerism .Moreover, the main motive of adverts organizatio...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...he products as much as they can through sports player and allure masses towards sports...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd allure masses towards sports products .Thus, all sports products are not fruitf...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... allure masses towards sports products .Thus, all sports products are not fruitful f...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...alistic attitude. Undeniably, people get information related to products with th...
^^
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ude. Undeniably, people get information related to products with the help of a...
^^
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on related to products with the help of advertisements.However,i still believe t...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ducts with the help of advertisements.However,i still believe that they have to be aw...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
...ith the help of advertisements.However,i still believe that they have to be awar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63247863248 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27836554086 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.2184850253 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.818181818 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361254952388 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12332337757 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845378675226 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200100414556 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904246456345 0.056905535591 159% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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