some people think that advantage of advertising sports products through famous sports players outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Advertisement suppose to be the form of mass communication. Presently, some proportion of masses think that there are ample of benefits of advertise sports product through sports player. Here, I would like to accord with the given statement.
There are manifold advantages of this trend. First and foremost, an organization can boost their sports product sales by hiring an eminent sports player.To illustrate, there are millions of fans of sports player and the influence of sports player allure masses toward sports product which is endorse by players .what is more, people can accumulate knowledge about the sport products if the sports product is done by prominent players. For example, sports player have a great deal of knowledge as well as experience about the products such as how to use the products and many more, Thus, the idea of advertising sports product with the help of sports players deserve appreciation.
Numerous benefits can be mentioned. Adverts related to sports product confer healthy earnings. To be specific, plethora of sports players can get opportunity to earn money by advertising sports product .Beside this, people can save their precious time through adverts as they easily compare the sports product and decide which is worthwhile for them. Thence, thus adverts with the help of sports players fully hold the water.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, the owner of sports product exaggerate the products information for their own purposes. However, I still believe that adverts through sports player is more fruitful for people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
Advertisement suppose to be the form of mass communication. P...
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Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...its of advertise sports product through sports player. Here, I would like to accord wi...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...orts product sales by hiring an eminent sports player.To illustrate, there are million...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...ales by hiring an eminent sports player.To illustrate, there are millions of fans ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'endorsed'.
Suggestion: endorsed
...e masses toward sports product which is endorse by players .what is more, people can ac...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...orts product which is endorse by players .what is more, people can accumulate know...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...owledge about the sport products if the sports product is done by prominent players. F...
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Suggestion: .
...earn money by advertising sports product .Beside this, people can save their preci...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Beside
...rn money by advertising sports product .Beside this, people can save their precious ti...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ough adverts as they easily compare the sports product and decide which is worthwhile ...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
... owner of sports product exaggerate the products information for their own purposes. How...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...r, I still believe that adverts through sports player is more fruitful for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36585365854 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68030174606 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540650406504 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 105.360096811 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416947850831 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159280270708 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123774766562 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274911358536 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630238985807 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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