some people think advertisements may have positive economic effects whereas others think there are negative social effects because individuals are not satisfied with who they are and what they have. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Advertisements around the world have brought a range of benefit for global economy. Although some citizens believe that it is good, others concerned about the possible negative influences.
On the one hand, there are an amount of reasons about the advantage of advertisements. First, advertisements help the place of manufactures which can propagandise and introduce a new good in the market, thus many creative products would be known as perfect invention. For instance, by producing of one product which have a wide range of users, the company must propagandize goods to consumers through advertising, which expands a manufacturing scale, resulting in beneficial economy. Furthermore, since they based on users demand on products, advertisements have been designed eye-catching more, which create the fight competition between each company. A smart phone, in fact, media commercial have been mushrooming and they cannot stop the competition of new goods, thus it bring a million of loyalty customers in every year, which inadvertently promoting flames in global economy.
The opponent of advertising may argue that it does not believe the beneficial advertisements effects. Firstly, most company cannot deny that they distort real product’s information in advertisements, especially companies are not famous, which lead to unsatisfied of users. In Vietnam, for example, in order to sell a large proportion of goods with scandals, JD Limited Technology sales of inferior products in the market that it is not as good as advertisements, due to big problem resulting in face bankruptcy, which took customer trusts with advertising. Given that it has undermined value society. In fact, if one company make mistakes about the quality of product, others would repeat the same ones, such as false advertising, which bring about a significant decrease of social values.
In conclusion, although advertising is not without the disadvantage, the upsides will justify these. As global life have nothing is perfect, humans being should learn to accept rather than conflict it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: amounts
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Suggestion: brings
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57232704403 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16003314875 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9298096154 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.571428571 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128156135675 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454135599268 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307313999395 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834416037903 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238530064749 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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