some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. other think parent needn't do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Parents around the world have tried to find the best way to improve knowledge and imaginative of children. Although some educators believe that this development should be tell and read books for children by their parents, others suggest that children may find movies or stories by themselves.
On the one hand, some parents sometime spend time on reading books for their kids. First, by choosing a variety of books, which is suitable for people under 12 ages, parents can easily censor the number of content stories before tell to children. In fact, since parents have chance to communicate and educate children, this will help reader who can follow imagination of kids, especially listeners from 3 to 12 ages, which develops children’s ability. Second, children who have the biggest curious stage, in order to explain each process occur around their life, fathers and mothers are likely to define specific things or events. For instance, Vietnamese always educate details for children, which is missions not only their educational institutions but also their families.
The opponent of education may argue that it is too easy for developing children, since human from 3 to 12 years old, which have to practice to decide or do everything, such as watch television, films or read the various books. However, this cannot the best choice. Children do not know what is the good or bad things, which lead to misunderstand. For example, since watchdogs cannot analyse a range of programs in YouTube or social networking sites, resulting in bad effects to children’s mind, which make distort intellectual ability.
In conclusion, an increasing number of modern country today would not avoid quickly developing children, which compares with several generations ago. Parents can help their kids who live in safety environment more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...believe that this development should be tell and read books for children by their pa...
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Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the biggest curious stage, in order to explain each process occur around their ...
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Line 9, column 132, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practice deciding'.
Suggestion: practice deciding
...n from 3 to 12 years old, which have to practice to decide or do everything, such as watch televis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30716723549 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72412253289 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621160409556 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8617000386 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.615384615 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264032744492 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100028647122 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776509118215 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172881519394 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845463797538 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.