Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.
Do you agree or disagree?
it is true that volunteer works can only be beneficial for both the personal and society as a whole, some people agree with this idea. However, I partially agree with this viewpoint.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why unpaid work is helpful for both volunteers and society. the main reason is teenagers can get a lot of experience in their society through unpaid jobs. For instance, some young people join in an English club in Ho Chi Minh City which offers free tours for foreigners and this help them have a real conversation with foreign people and allows them to enhance their English ability. Moreover, volunteer works also might save up a budget for governments. Governments do not need to pay lots of money to clear the trash. This helps the government save money to help poor people or other welfare for the local community.
On the other hand, I believe that all teenagers should not be required to do unpaid works in their free time to help local residents. First of all, young people undergo under the pressure of study because some teachers now often spend plenty of homework for their students and require students in their class to reach a top of scores in school. Therefore, if some young people were forced to do unpaid work, they would be prone to meet stress or depression, that will cut the quality-studying at school. Moreover, some commentators disagree with young people have unpaid works while their family are very poor and need them to help.
To sum up, although volunteer jobs bring some benefit to youngsters and the community, I am completely against the idea of making it become compulsory.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, first of all, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78091872792 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51613926692 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7368169184 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43730215065 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149807017131 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116873661884 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225291806674 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118271888767 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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