Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today's modern world, people are becoming more extrovert and open due to current exposure to media. Some section of society have a opinion that university students should be allowed to pursue courses of their choice, rather than restricting or forcing them to choose subjects thought to be meaningful for their future career for example science and technology. I am strictly with section which is pro student's choice.This essay will explain both points along with supporting statements for my view.
Controlling student's choice of subject can be done by orthodox parents or teachers only in present time. they prove validity by saying that students are immature, and its elder's responsibity to guide them in selection of course, in order to have tailor- made career. Recent study has indicated that parent's choice subjects are not studied vigorously by pupils, and in most of cases they just study for the sake of completing degree. And failure in future life becomes inevitable.take a case of music lover forced to take medicine course, what sort of mental harrasment that student may undergo.
Today's society should be open to new ideas, new opinions and new choices by students. in contrast to previous generation, due to internet and social media, currently pupils are more aware about the things they adore, and their stream of favourite subjects. Freedom of choice should be respected. Apart from guiding students about future career in specific technology, parents and teachers should take active interest in what student like, and how a successful career can be carved in that subject. By doing this, they not only will motivate their sons/daughters but also on same page with them like their friends. and there will be complete positivity in making a career.
To sum up, stopping students to pursue career in their choice subject will be detrimental to their career due to least interest by that individual. Whereas, by allowing or supporting students's choice sujects and career will flourish their future with their active participation and interest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, whereas, apart from, for example, in contrast, of course, sort of, in contrast to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63292644619 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564564564565 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2545441005 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.933333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290739245704 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993847002102 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530045259446 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174643901533 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508238169625 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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