Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
People are divided in their belief about what students should study. Some of them are thinking that is better to let the young people to choose the area of study depending on their own feeling. In contrast other are saying that is better for students to pick up for courses just exact science.
First if all undergraduates will show their interest for realistic sciences other area such as music, film or design will remain uncovered and our world is going to be sterile without colour and sound.
Moreover if someone who love to paint will find very difficult to learn technology and he/she will not be able to meet the greatest of his/hers potential or high standards of knowledge in that field.
Undoubtedly humans are different, with different area of interest, with different abilities, with various skills. Some of us are keen on math or chemistry and other are keen on literature or astronomy. Around us we can find a lot of people with strong abilities to create music or beautiful picture. It is in word best interest to let everyone to choose what they want to study according with their ability or field of interest.
Evidently my opinion is to let everyone chose what they want to study, according with their ability and fields of interest not to force them to choose what is with the most utility in the future. Of course all young people have the need to be guided in life by parents and teachers but they can just to show the way and they can have some influence on the decision but the decision have to be taken by students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: contrast,
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: word the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, in contrast, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62545454545 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39436252494 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530909090909 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9970020185 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.636363636 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214723368367 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076289968035 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478696347892 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113090794442 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392719688167 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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