Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays this is no longer true.
There is a stereotype that the most decent way to get accomplishment in the future is to engage in university education. Although this sentiment can be justified to some certain extent, I am more inclined in the opposite statement owing to a handful of reasons.
Admittedly, approved qualifications bring students some certain advantages in the race of life. First, university is considered a summarized society, hence pupils find it easy to interact with multitude kinds of people regarding the good and the bad. Second, the academic environment gives students chances to meet professors from every faculty who can provide their own knowledges, experiences to orient students to get appropriate jobs in the future. Furthermore, people who go to the university can enhance their soft skills such as presenting, communicating and critical thinking which help them a lot in daily life or working offices.
On the other hand, there are still successes for people who make a living without academic degrees. How come, people believe that realistic experiences get more benefits than wasting a 4-year period and immerse in tons of theory which barely help after graduating. For instance, Bill Gates, a renowned CEO and co-founder in Microsoft, who dropped out of Harvard University for research purposes on computers and as the result he became one of the wealthiest men in the world.
To summarize, it is not fundamental whether people learn in university or not, the thing is people put targets in their lives, be more ambitious, dedicated and motivated; and accomplishments will definitely find them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, second, so, still, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2578125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00906021199 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64453125 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.525756901 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.6 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212654608886 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776967958019 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345596909094 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118702025274 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234980001688 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.