Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Raising the minimum legal age for driving a car or riding a motorcycle is thought to be the most efficient method of preventing to prevent accidents. While I agree that increasing driving age helps to reduce road accidents, I believe that other factors are just as important.
On one side, I agree that raising the minimum driving age would reduce traffic fatalities and injuries. young drivers frequently break the rules and create cause unexpected accidents due to/owing to their lack of responsibility, maturity, and experience; However, as they get older, they get more experience- the older they become, the more experience they get. Clearly, older drivers are calmer and more carefully than the young ones while facing with unusual or unexpected circumstances. for example, younger drivers may be frightened and worry worried if a person crosses the road quickly, but senior drivers may brake or turn the steering wheel instead. to summarize, I support raising the driving age.
Nonetheless, I feel there are more effective ways to preserve road safety. to begin, the government should encourage commuters to use public transportation rather than private transportation in order to alleviate traffic congestion. Second, if commuters break the law, they should be fined harshly or lose their driver's license. As a result, drivers are more inclined to follow the rules, and traffic accidents are reduced. Finally, the government should spend more money on improving infrastructure in order to improve driving conditions.
In conclusion, while raising the driving age does have an impact on the frequency of car accidents, i do not believe it exceeds all other factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35471698113 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89817708263 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577358490566 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7478850908 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181224305713 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717702161559 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652919801567 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122877450529 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680131453231 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.