some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to make vehicle driver take test each year to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Essay topics:

some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to make vehicle driver take test each year .to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

vehicles are most common in this growing world as for medium of travelling. At some point a group of people reckon that drivers have to give a driving test each year. In my opinion ,i disagree with this because such type of test may not ensure the road safety ,but there are other alternative ways to improve it.

Firstly, one reason of disagreement is that government have to spend money to conduct this type of test .Although government can fix cameras on the roads with speed sensing sensors to monitor and racking of vehicles. Moreover, by panalizing the drivers who drive irresponsibly on roads ,also tis will help to minimize overall safety on roads. for instance ,cars have a monetering device that gives a alert to the drivers as a beep sound while vehicle overspeed.

secondly, the another rason is it will make a lot of paper work and practical work for road transport office and they have to appoint more employee to fulfill their work.however this will make a whole in pocket and may shown a decrese the ration for inividuals to do so.

In recepitulation, alternative rules for safety would be greater than taking a test eachyyear.it will not only rose the road standards of roads but also prevent more accidents on it.

Votes
Average: 6.8 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as for, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77209302326 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63049471274 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637209302326 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8707069218 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.25 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.375 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285867091531 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117277919786 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616424215369 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163784707532 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982008547081 0.056905535591 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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