Some people think the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving car or riding motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics: Some people think the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving car or riding motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Over the past decades, some people reckon that the role of minimizing the legal age for driving vehicles and riding motorbike is of greater significance when it comes to road safety. Indeed, to my mind, there is now convincing evidence that the legal age for drive certificate could not diminish the rate of accidents.

To embark upon, I have to say that in recent years according the mortality rate, many researchers studied the importance of allowed age for receiving certificate which permit the people to drive definitely. Yet, the young people who have just gained the a licence are not awareness of tremendously impact on driving in high-speed specially in highways while the old people would be able to react when facing an accident suddenly. To illustrate, do the brakes of the car stop working, the young people panic and the accident is more likely to occur. Result of this event will remind until there dying day such as backache.

On the other hand, statistically speaking, most horrible accident take placed are not related to who old the drivers are. A huge number people injured are not young as well as. The young not only drive carefully but also slowly. As a result, minimum the authorized age is not associated in traffic accident. Moreover, elderly in terms of some disease from heart attack to auditory problem are more guilty in an accident.

Finally, it is clear that the government should impose the regulations to provide safety of roads. On of the measures is to repair infrastruction of street.

By way of conclusion, there are variety reasons to decrease the protection. Limiting the young to commute on the road a does not decrease the accident rate definitely. Besides, the governor should consider stricter punishment to drive bumper to bumper.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, moreover, so, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9966442953 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69298176823 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587248322148 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2695084821 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215197140256 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571940405793 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525856425108 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102228753144 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686356944264 0.056905535591 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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