There are some argument about what is the best punishment to the offenders to lessen the rate of crime. Some believe that prisoning for prolong time would be the best means, while others, myself included, think that edutating people proberly and creating emplyment for all would be best measure to cut down the offences.
On the one hand, keeping a offenders for a long period of time can demotive people from doing any serious crime. People would not like to stay in a boundary for a long to just after doing some bad work. Thus, people will not commit crime and the rate will be lessen.
One the other hand, there are some measures that could be put into practice. First of all, government should make sure that people of all stages is educated enough so that they can maintain their status in the society.
Provided that the inhabitants of a region is well educated, they will not willing to do crime that can hamper his image in society. Therefore, the inhabitance of that area will not do any kind of crime. Moreover, creating more and more employment opportunitis would also be a key measure to decrease the number of violation. If all educated people got a job or employed by his own, he will never think to do any kind of violation. In Swden, for instance, people have huge job opportunity for all types of people. Therefore, there is just few cases of offence in this country.
In conclusion, to decline the rate of violation through just prolonging the time of sentences would work somewhat, however, educating people and generating the opportunity of emplyement can also be the key measures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...ly and creating emplyment for all would be best measure to cut down the offences. On...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e offences. On the one hand, keeping a offenders for a long period of time can...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a offender' or simply 'offenders'?
Suggestion: a offender; offenders
...e offences. On the one hand, keeping a offenders for a long period of time can demotive ...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ne hand, keeping a offenders for a long period of time can demotive people from doing any seri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74021352313 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50271315903 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519572953737 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0091934223 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137697193392 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053473822786 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364598460646 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830871099164 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443449681284 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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