Some people think that the capital punishment is the most effective way to stop serious crime.
Do you think the advantage outweigh the disadvantage of using capital punishment?
It is inevitably true that the crime has been increasing day by day. Some of the crime is crucial and some of the crime are not so harmful. In the world today, different type of the crime has different type of punishment. Some of people argued that for the crucial crime has only one solution to stop from death Punishment. It is agreed that the best way to resolve of serious crime is the capital punishment.
Firstly, the such type of punishment helps to stop to happens the big crime into the society. There are major advantages, the people feel secure that to work and travel easily in the night time also. If the strong punishment or rules has in the country, where the criminal are never doing the serious crime. The biggest crime is the society are sexual harassment, human trafficking, theft, children abuse and etc. Basically, in the developing country the women, children and young girls are the targets to the criminals. So if government made strong security force and good rules against the sexual harassment it may help to reduce the crime from society. People may save from such crime.
On the other hand, there are few disadvantages of the capital punishment. The rights for lives of people has lost by this punishment, we don’t have any right to seizure their life even though he/she is criminal. Moreover, sometimes the innocent people has become victimized and they may have lost his/her life without attempting any criminal activities.
In a nutshell, the different type of the crime has different punishment. The capital punishment has one and only punishment for crucial crime. However, this punishment has some demerits but its help to the community to make a safely and fearless. So the advantage of capital punishment has outweighed then the disadvantage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...e crime has been increasing day by day. Some of the crime is crucial and some of the crime ...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...y day. Some of the crime is crucial and some of the crime are not so harmful. In the world ...
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the people') or simply say ''Some people''.
Suggestion: Some of the people; Some people
...crime has different type of punishment. Some of people argued that for the crucial crime has o...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'happen'.
Suggestion: happen
...uch type of punishment helps to stop to happens the big crime into the society. There a...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ork and travel easily in the night time also. If the strong punishment or rules has ...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...uman trafficking, theft, children abuse and etc. Basically, in the developing country th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262686567164 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.149253731343 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0925373134328 0.0946595960268 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0477611940299 0.0501214627716 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0208955223881 0.0437548338989 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107462686567 0.122226691241 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0298507462687 0.0403226058552 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63282516387 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0298507462687 0.0326793684256 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.134328358209 0.0861772015684 156% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0089552238806 0.021408717616 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00597014925373 0.011925033212 50% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1789.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9238410596 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327814569536 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241721854305 0.28420135186 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175496688742 0.203846283523 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129139072848 0.137316102897 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63282516387 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.037074148 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486754966887 0.56093040696 87% => OK
Word variations: 48.0893149038 60.7387585426 79% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8947368421 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7952118764 49.517814964 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1578947368 127.492653851 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.814263465372 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 40.0669222726 49.1944974215 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.83561643836 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.580916096409 0.332605444948 175% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132442907717 0.102741220458 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.062911758997 0.0668466124924 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.606464674852 0.534860350844 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119663437842 0.148594505496 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.275906063739 0.134430193775 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115632603129 0.0742795772207 156% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.419393323478 0.324371583561 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0915912026579 0.0638462369009 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.431752757927 0.228012699653 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862156762794 0.058150111329 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 12.0 2.5751503006 466% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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