Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in cities and other think bicycles are better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
To embark with, it is believed by few people that cars are the best way to travel in cities. This is so because cars are time saver transport going to trace facility available in this. When people wants to go on long trips and these are far away from their destination, then they can easily go on cars with four to five passengers in one run. Along with this, it saves a lot of time and energy of people due to its efficiency. Had interview, to examplify, individual already late going to some work at home, so they can easily go on time with the usage of car in cities there is a lot of traffic; consequently they will get job due to reach on time.
Nonetheless bicycles, undoubtedly, are the better way to be physically fit. Elaborately, in today's Era multifareous people are getting obese due to less involvement in physical activities; and everyone has better means of transport like cars. As in the past people used bicycle more so they saved from physically ailments owing to the fact people need its own energy to run on bicycles. Bicycles also reduce pollution and it needs no petrol, moreover it has no cost, whereas it if people not used bicycles;
;resultantly, they will go to gym in their later life to be physically fit. As per the esteemed newspaper report by 'The Tribune' that in this modern word merely 50% of elders are fond of bicycles due to suggestion by doctors.
To conclude, although people vary in their opinion. I am convinced with those who believed that bicycles are better way to travel owing to not only physical fitness but also it reduce pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nonetheless,
...ey will get job due to reach on time Nonetheless bicycles undoubtedly are the better way...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: bicycles
...ct people need its own energy to run on bicycles Bicycles also reduce pollution and it needs no p...
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Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
...o not only physical fitness but also it reduce pollution
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4823943662 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47110608929 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528169014085 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 284.0 20.2975951904 1399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1273.0 106.682146367 1193% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 284.0 20.7667163134 1368% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 69.0 7.06120827912 977% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214950666703 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214950666703 0.084324248473 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128939553495 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655445915091 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 141.7 13.0946893788 1082% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -208.32 50.2224549098 -415% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 112.9 11.3001002004 999% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.18 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.84 8.58950901804 243% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 115.6 10.1190380762 1142% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.7795591182 529% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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