Some people think that childcare centers provides the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better to care for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and ages, (in the modern world), families with both working parents tend to be busy with a nine-to-five job, so they need to rely on someone else to take care their young ones while going out or working. Many think children-care organizations can be the best option to look after. However, detractors claim that children the responsibilities of child-rearing should fall on grandparents or even close relatives. I side with the later view.
On the one hand, it is believed that youngsters should be sent to children institutions for some reasons. The first one is childcare services is professional places in taking care of children and in which pack with well-trained staff. Therefore, they experience effective ways to support children integrate in new community and it also find easier for baby-sisters to react quickly and give one of them first aid when a child falls over and gets injures. Moreover, these centers are actually equipped with facilities such as playgrounds, labs and gardens that allow their young clients to learn about natural world as well as engage in physical and extra-curriculum activities. While they partake aforementioned activities,
they have valuable chances to make new friends with their peers. By doing so, this make an important contribution to children’s development and the capacity of communication. Is is more likely to become hindrances if they are looked after at home.
On the other hand, I would argue that it is better to let a child are taken of by their grandparents. The key objective of child-rearing is to assure a safe place that children can grow and learn well. Grandparents who have much more experience in raising children. Hence, they know ways how to calm the baby when he cries. In addition, they would always keep an eye for their children to make sure that they are always intact. Grandparents also have deeper insight into their children’s go-to tastes, as they can supply gourmet and hearty meals that have adequate nutrition. Staying at home can shell the children away from being bullied by their aggressive peers. Therefore, while lacking certain facilities services, staying with one’s grandparents is considered the better choice.
In conclusion, children centers may be deemed as the appropriate choice to send children to, I believe that it is more beneficial to raise and take care of them at home by their own grandparents or even close-knit relatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13466334165 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97598299275 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56608478803 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2151892285 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.95 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.05 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22818476484 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663341769262 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044393224137 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122869705281 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519463548727 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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