Some people think that children should be studying all the mandatory subjects until the age of ten, while others believe they should have an option to select favorite subjects to study. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your experience.
People have different views about how much choice children should have with regard to what subjects they can study before the age of ten. While some agree that everyone should be able to select favorite subjects to study, I believe that the child should study all the compulsory subjects.
Children have great ability to gain knowledge quickly, especially when they are before ten years old. Therefore, they should study obligatory subjects firstly and then they have more choices to choose their favorite ones in the future. In my opinion, if children were not focus on general subjects like mathematics, language, science, history and geography, they would not be capable to recognize their special talent in various fields. In addition, children should be learned some of those basic subjects like language which is more likely to be beneficial for preparing them toward future life. For instance, a child just likes to study math but he abandons language course. Although he is extremely talented in math, he would not find a proper career in future because of lack of communication skills. Also, it is essentially that children should have a minimum knowledge about historic or geographic issues which makes them familiar with the surrounding environment and its changes throughout history.
In majority children, they do not know their favorite subjects so learning mandatory ones would inspire to them the main stuff that they would like to develop. Nevertheless, if the child have passion on specific subjects, there are lots of ways to approach it. For example, they can attend to some school’s club to extend their enthusiasm.
By way of conclusion, compared to the favorite subjects, studying obligatory ones would give more basic knowledge to children which provide more benefit for them to identify their ability and talent well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'focused', 'focussed'.
Suggestion: focused; focussed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25925925926 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59994584484 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572390572391 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5330480803 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.153846154 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34574582338 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127080636578 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999965589763 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225858864643 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140849576216 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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